JoanaPhillips
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Ugh, I am so stuck. 
I have to write a compare and contrast essay for my sociology class, comparing online learning vs. traditional classrooms post-pandemic. I thought this would be easy because it’s so relevant. But my first draft was just a list. "Online is flexible, in-person is social. Online uses Zoom, in-person uses a whiteboard." My professor wrote "SO WHAT?" in big red letters in the margin. Brutal. 
That’s my problem. I can make the Venn diagram all day long, but I can’t seem to find the actual point of my essay. I know a compare and contrast essay needs a thesis that makes an argument, but how do you even get there? How do you turn a list of differences into something that actually says something meaningful?
I was thinking maybe my argument could be that the ideal learning environment isn't one or the other, but a hybrid model that takes the best of both. Like, the flexibility of online with the community-building aspects of in-person classes. But is that too obvious? Is that even an argument, or is it just a conclusion?
I feel like I’m just rearranging deck chairs on the Titanic here.
How do you guys move past the obvious comparisons and dig into the "why" that actually matters? How do you find the heartbeat of a compare and contrast essay?
I have to write a compare and contrast essay for my sociology class, comparing online learning vs. traditional classrooms post-pandemic. I thought this would be easy because it’s so relevant. But my first draft was just a list. "Online is flexible, in-person is social. Online uses Zoom, in-person uses a whiteboard." My professor wrote "SO WHAT?" in big red letters in the margin. Brutal. That’s my problem. I can make the Venn diagram all day long, but I can’t seem to find the actual point of my essay. I know a compare and contrast essay needs a thesis that makes an argument, but how do you even get there? How do you turn a list of differences into something that actually says something meaningful?
I was thinking maybe my argument could be that the ideal learning environment isn't one or the other, but a hybrid model that takes the best of both. Like, the flexibility of online with the community-building aspects of in-person classes. But is that too obvious? Is that even an argument, or is it just a conclusion?
I feel like I’m just rearranging deck chairs on the Titanic here.
How do you guys move past the obvious comparisons and dig into the "why" that actually matters? How do you find the heartbeat of a compare and contrast essay?
